Social skills

Can ChatGPT edit fiction? 4 professional editors asked AI to do their job – and it ruined their short story

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月曜日, 2月 12, 2024

We are professional editors, with extensive experience in the Australian book publishing industry, who wanted to know how ChatGPT would perform when compared to a human editor.

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  • We are professional editors, with extensive experience in the Australian book publishing industry, who wanted to know how ChatGPT would perform when compared to a human editor.
  • To find out, we decided to ask it to edit a short story that had already been worked on by human editors – and we compared the results.

The experiment: ChatGPT vs human editors

  • The story we chose, The Ninch (written by Rose), had gone through three separate rounds of editing, with four human editors (and a typesetter).
  • The first version had been rejected by literary journal Overland, but its fiction editor Claire Corbett had given generous feedback.
  • We had a wealth of human feedback to compare ChatGPT’s recommendations with.
  • By comparing it with human examples, we tried to determine where and at what stage in the process ChatGPT might be most successful as an editorial tool.

Round 1: the first draft

  • (Authors submitting stories to magazines and journals generally don’t give human editors a detailed, prescriptive brief.)
  • Interestingly, ChatGPT did not pick up that the story was now published and attributed to an author.
  • Nor did it define the genre, which is one of the first assessments an editor makes.
  • And the advice for more foreshadowing, dialogue and description, along with shorter paragraphs and an alternative ending, was generally sound.

Stage two: AI (re)writes

  • Could you please suggest places in the story where the pace needs to speed up or slow down?
  • Could you please suggest places where there is too much imagery and it needs more action storytelling instead?
  • Could you please suggest places in the story where the pace needs to speed up or slow down?
  • Could you please suggest places where there is too much imagery and it needs more action storytelling instead?
  • ChatGPT also changed the text from Australian English (which all Australian publications require) to US spelling and style (“realization”, “mom”).

What did the human editors do?

  • The biggest problem is that final transition – I don’t know how to read the narrator.
  • For me stories are driven by choices and I’m not clear what decision our narrator, or anyone else, in the story faces.
  • It’s entirely possible I’m not getting something important, but I think that if I’m not getting it, our readers won’t either.
  • It incorporates intellectual, creative and emotional capital – all gained from lived experience, complemented by technical skills and industry expertise, applied through the prism of human understanding.
  • (After all, the author doesn’t have to do what we say – ours is a persuasive profession.)

Round 2: the revised story

  • Next, we submitted a revised draft that had addressed Claire’s suggestions and incorporated the conversations with Nicola.
  • Again, it didn’t pick up that the story had already been published, nor did it clearly identify the genre.
  • It was a laborious process: the 2,500-word piece had to be submitted in chunks of 300–500 words and the revised sections manually combined.
  • Read more:
    'The entire industry is based on hunches': is Australian publishing an art, a science or a gamble?

Round 3: our final submission

  • In the third and final round of the experiment, we submitted the draft that had been accepted by Meanjin.
  • This time, we followed up with separate prompts for each element we wanted ChatGPT to review: title, pacing, imagery/description.
  • ChatGPT came back with suggestions for how to revise specific parts of the text, but the suggestions were once again formulaic.
  • There was no attempt to offer – or support – any decision to go against familiar tropes.


Sometimes editorial expertise shows itself in not changing a text. Different isn’t necessarily good. It takes an expert to recognise when a story is working just fine. If it ain’t broke, don’t fix it. It also takes a certain kind of aerial, bird’s-eye view to notice when the way type is set creates ambiguities in the text. Typesetters really are akin to editors.

The verdict: can ChatGPT edit?

  • But we recommend editors and authors don’t ask it to give individual assessments or expert interventions any time soon.
  • A major problem that emerged early in this experiment involved ethics: ChatGPT did not ask for or verify the authorship of our story.
  • Human editors demonstrate their credentials through their work history, and keep their experience up-to-date with professional training and qualifications.
  • In Rose’s case, her oceanic allegory about difference, with a nod to the supernatural, was turned it into a story about a fish.

ChatGPT is ‘like the new intern’

  • AI suggestions can be scrutinised – and integrated or dismissed – by authors or editors during the creative process.
  • But when used by human editors, it’s like any other tool – as good, or bad, as the tradesperson who wields it.
  • Renée Otmar is affiliated with the Institute of Professional Editors, the Australian Society of Authors, Writers Victoria, Small Press Network and Life Stories Australia.
  • She is an Honorary Research Fellow in the Faculty of Health, Deakin University.

CentralReach Announces Acquisition of SILAS, a Rapidly Growing, New Jersey-Based Provider of SEL and Behavior Solutions for PreK-12 Students in Any Type of Classroom

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木曜日, 2月 8, 2024

SILAS has almost tripled in size since 2020 purely through word of mouth and teacher referrals and now touches 35,000 students across over 40 school districts in New Jersey.

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  • SILAS has almost tripled in size since 2020 purely through word of mouth and teacher referrals and now touches 35,000 students across over 40 school districts in New Jersey.
  • A 2019 study also concluded that the use of SILAS curriculum and software generated a statistically significant increase in student ratings in all competency areas.
  • I can add elements of different models of counseling and also add psycho-educational topics that impact the students in school."
  • Another SILAS customer, Ettie Luban, MA, CCC-SLP, BCBA, Speech Pathologist from Bright Beginnings, also shared, “The students are highly motivated by the moviemaking component.

Celebree School Enters 30th Year with Impressive Franchise Growth & Sales Performance

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水曜日, 2月 7, 2024

BALTIMORE, Feb. 7, 2024 /PRNewswire/ -- Celebree School, a leader in early childhood education that provides infant and toddler care, preschool, before and aftercare, and summer camp programs, is primed for continued growth in 2024 following a groundbreaking 2023 that included several new openings, licenses and franchise agreements for new Celebree Schools across the country.

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  • Embarking on its 30th year, Celebree School currently has 47 schools open and 55 franchisees who have been awarded over 100 sites.
  • According to Celebree School's Franchise Disclosure Document, the average Gross Revenues for the three franchised Celebree Schools that were open for the entire 2023 year were $2,074,263.
  • Additionally, the brand updated its franchise sales and onboarding process by implementing AI-enabled solutions, scheduling tools, and automated workflows, resulting in a 130 percent franchise sales increase YOY.
  • "Over the last 30 years, we've built an incredible infrastructure for growth," said Richard Huffman, Founder and CEO of Celebree School.

Is Montessori education all it’s cracked up to be? What science says

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火曜日, 2月 6, 2024

Walk into any bookshop these days and you will find Montessori-labelled books and games galore. Born at the start of the 20th century, Montessori teaching methods have enjoyed increasing popularity in Europe over the past 20 years. But what does the science tell us about the effectiveness of Montessori education compared with other forms of teaching? Is the method, which is now more than 100 years old, still relevant to modern life?The ABCs of Montessori education Founded on a number of key principles, Montessori education believes children will learn better if we entrust them with more freedom.

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Walk into any bookshop these days and you will find Montessori-labelled books and games galore. Born at the start of the 20th century, Montessori teaching methods have enjoyed increasing popularity in Europe over the past 20 years. But what does the science tell us about the effectiveness of Montessori education compared with other forms of teaching? Is the method, which is now more than 100 years old, still relevant to modern life?

The ABCs of Montessori education

  • Founded on a number of key principles, Montessori education believes children will learn better if we entrust them with more freedom.
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    In addition, the Montessori environment enables embodied cognition.

  • It would appear that the Montessori teaching method has all of the ingredients to champion a child’s education and psychological development.
  • However, up until now, there has been no comprehensive study that has been able to draw any real conclusions about the effects of Montessori teaching methods.

Better grades and social skills

  • The results of this meta-analysis show that Montessori teaching methods have significant positive impacts on social skills and school results.
  • Compared with other forms of teaching, Montessori’s approach enables students to better grasp social situations, solve social problems, and put themselves in other people’s shoes.
  • Various features of Montessori’s approach are thought to encourage the development of social skills, such as valuing cooperation over competition, and encouraging mutual respect and sharing.

Lesser impacts on other (less studied) areas

  • For example, the teaching method benefited only very slightly cognitive skills, which include memory, inhibition, attention span, planning as well as IQ.
  • This could be because children are more likely to exercise their cognitive skills through school tasks themselves than through a particular teaching method.
  • All in all, the impacts of Montessori education on children’s development and learning vary from low to high.


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Children’s high-impact sports can be abuse – experts explain why

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火曜日, 2月 6, 2024

CTE continues to be a serious risk associated with high impact sports, such as boxing, American football and rugby.

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  • CTE continues to be a serious risk associated with high impact sports, such as boxing, American football and rugby.
  • The NFL has paid out almost a million pounds to former players suffering the effects of sport-induced brain trauma.
  • Each additional year of playing impact sports raises the risk of CTE, by as much as 30% in American football.
  • Academic evidence and medical professionals now agree that sport-induced brain trauma leads to degenerative brain disease.

Not suitable for under-18s

  • We are not calling for adult versions of impact sports to be banned and our argument does not apply to sports or activities where brain trauma might occur by accident.
  • For example, heading a football can result in immediate and measurable alterations to brain functioning and longer-term brain diseases, such as CTE.
  • The risk of CTE is far higher in sports such as American football and rugby.

Staying healthy

  • Teams sports can reduce isolation and help players to develop a range of social skills.
  • There are no health benefits of tackling – and there are no health benefits of being struck in the head.
  • Research has shown that incidents of contact during children’s rugby are the cause of cause of 87% of known injuries.

Inability to consent

  • Children are unable to make informed decisions about the long-term risks of these activities.
  • Our research draws on a number of legal positions that support our argument that neither children nor parents on their behalf can consent to sports that require brain trauma as a necessary component of the sport.
  • Some commentators have agreed that while high-impact sports are dangerous, using the term child abuse is a step too far.
  • Read more:
    Sport-induced traumatic brain injury: families reveal the 'hell' of living with the condition


Keith Parry is affiliated with the Concussion Legacy Foundation (UK). Eric Anderson and Gary Turner do not work for, consult, own shares in or receive funding from any company or organisation that would benefit from this article, and have disclosed no relevant affiliations beyond their academic appointment.

Autism Specialists to Host Grand Opening of New Wisconsin Clinic for Young Children

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月曜日, 2月 5, 2024

EAU CLAIRE, Wis., Feb. 5, 2024 /PRNewswire/ -- Caravel Autism Health , a leader in the diagnosis and treatment of young children on the autism spectrum, is hosting a ribbon-cutting on February 6 to celebrate the grand opening of a new, state-of-the-art autism therapy clinic.

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  • EAU CLAIRE, Wis., Feb. 5, 2024 /PRNewswire/ -- Caravel Autism Health , a leader in the diagnosis and treatment of young children on the autism spectrum, is hosting a ribbon-cutting on February 6 to celebrate the grand opening of a new, state-of-the-art autism therapy clinic.
  • Caravel specializes in Applied Behavior Analysis therapy, which uses positive reinforcement to help children with autism improve a wide range of skills including communication and social skills.
  • "Providing access to high-quality therapy at a young age is how we ensure that children achieve the best possible outcomes.
  • "We change the lives of families touched by autism by helping children reach their full potential," explained Carly Burish, Caravel's Eau Claire clinic director.

Nicklaus Children's Launches National Initiative to Protect Kids from Digital Technology

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水曜日, 1月 31, 2024

MIAMI, Jan. 31, 2024 /PRNewswire/ -- To support parents in navigating the complexities of today's digital age, in which children can access inappropriate content, experience cyberbullying, suffer mental distress and addiction by using their screen devices, Nicklaus Children's Hospital, the Digital Health Institute for Transformation (DHIT) and other key community partners today announced the formation of The Digital Safety Alliance and launched the Safe+Sound initiative.

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  • Parents are the first line of defense in setting boundaries for digital device usage.
  • We want them to be informed before deciding when to give their kids a smartphone."
  • The goal is to serve as a think-tank to provide national awareness, best practices, vetted resources, and advocate for digital safeguards and industry standards.
  • It's part of our commitment to the health and wellbeing of the most vulnerable members of our society; our kids."

How simple changes can open up Britain’s green spaces so everyone can benefit from them

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火曜日, 1月 30, 2024

However, while stiles connect trails and public pathways, they are a physical barrier to accessible green spaces for all.

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  • However, while stiles connect trails and public pathways, they are a physical barrier to accessible green spaces for all.
  • Research by us and others shows how opening up natural spaces in such ways can particularly benefit young and disabled people.
  • Disabled people access natural and rural green spaces, including national parks, much less frequently than non-disabled people.
  • Rural green spaces can simply feel daunting for some people, often requiring skilful navigation, specialist equipment and confidence.

Removing barriers

  • Launched by the Lake District National Park nearly two decades ago, the Miles Without Stiles initiative improves the accessibility of many public footpaths and trails.
  • The Lake District National Park now boasts 51 Miles Without Stiles routes, the Peak District National Park has 20 and South Downs National Park has seven.
  • And 21% of visitors to the Lake District National Park choose routes because of their accessibility, according to a 2019 Lake District National Park Authority report.

Connecting with nature

  • That relates to nature access too, and is especially relevant for young people with special educational needs and disabilities who experience a range of barriers to regular physical activity.
  • We believe that schools, sport, and other physical activity providers could learn much from Miles Without Stiles about accessibility.


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Anthony Maher works for Leeds Beckett University. Janine Coates does not work for, consult, own shares in or receive funding from any company or organisation that would benefit from this article, and has disclosed no relevant affiliations beyond their academic appointment.

Accelerated Brands Announces $25,000 Donation to Autism Speaks

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金曜日, 1月 26, 2024

WINSTON-SALEM, N.C., Jan. 26, 2024 /PRNewswire-PRWeb/ -- Accelerated Brands, one of the leading oil change and car wash platforms in the United States, is pleased to announce the donation of $25,000 to Autism Speaks. The donations were collected as part of Accelerated Brands' recent fundraising campaign at select Strickland Brothers Oil Change and Trademark Car Wash locations, where customers could make a monetary donation or purchase a special edition air freshener with all net proceeds donated back to Autism Speaks.

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  • Accelerated Brands, one of the leading oil change and car wash platforms in the United States, is pleased to announce the donation of $25,000 to Autism Speaks.
  • The donations were collected as part of Accelerated Brands' recent fundraising campaign at select Strickland Brothers Oil Change and Trademark Car Wash locations, where customers could make a monetary donation or purchase a special edition air freshener with all net proceeds donated back to Autism Speaks.
  • WINSTON-SALEM, N.C., Jan. 26, 2024 /PRNewswire-PRWeb/ -- Accelerated Brands , one of the leading oil change and car wash platforms in the United States, is pleased to announce the donation of $25,000 to Autism Speaks.
  • The donations were collected as part of Accelerated Brands' recent fundraising campaign at select Strickland Brothers Oil Change and Trademark Car Wash locations, where customers could make a monetary donation or purchase a special edition air freshener with all net proceeds donated back to Autism Speaks.

Brain Mechanism Teaches Mice to Avoid Bullies

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水曜日, 1月 24, 2024

NEW YORK, Jan. 24, 2024 /PRNewswire/ -- Like humans, mice live in complex social groups, fight over territory and mates, and learn when it is safer to avoid certain opponents. After losing even a brief fight, the defeated animals will flee from the mice that hurt them for weeks afterward, a new study shows.

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  • After losing even a brief fight, the defeated animals will flee from the mice that hurt them for weeks afterward, a new study shows.
  • The team had previously found that this special region, called the anterior ventrolateral part of the ventromedial hypothalamus (aVMHvl), helps rodents defend themselves against bullies' attacks.
  • The study showed that when rival mice first meet, scent information about opponents is not strong enough to activate aVMHvl cells to prompt a retreat.
  • In addition, the findings revealed that pain prompted the immediate activation of oxytocin-releasing brain cells located right next to the aVMHvl.